A spiritual teacher once told me that when we write things down we stop the process. Writing comes from the left brain and processing from the right. Maybe when you read what you wrote, you are reacting to the complexity that didn't get brought out. Perhaps allow the emotion around whatever you are wanting to write down to circle around a bit longer. Then the other part of teacher's recommendation, write as few words as possible. Try to see if yu can distill into once sentence the overall meaning.
On May 20, 2017 Cheryl rose wrote :
A spiritual teacher once told me that when we write things down we stop the process. Writing comes from the left brain and processing from the right. Maybe when you read what you wrote, you are reacting to the complexity that didn't get brought out. Perhaps allow the emotion around whatever you are wanting to write down to circle around a bit longer. Then the other part of teacher's recommendation, write as few words as possible. Try to see if yu can distill into once sentence the overall meaning.